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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-05-31 10:48 PM


an important study conducted that individuals no longer visual
subliminally record
over
1033425446 advertisements per day all in their iris cornea confection
this imperitive deliberation
however lost its funding...
however lost its funding...
however lost its funding...
oh and can you spare a dime
           but then you wouldn’t believe me
       so better make it 4 dollars
           but that will buy a bottle
       so better bring a sandwich
          cuz I’m really really hungry
       and this isn’t any game
       so could you make it fast
         and I don’t like pimento cheese
make it Oscar Meyer please
I don’t prefer tap water
          Ozarka if you will
Hellman’s mayo
Vlasic pickles
Wonder bread will only do
         hey, you brought me Mad Dog
no no i do not take offense
        


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-01-2002 12:58 AM).]

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2002-06-01 10:25 AM


Most important indeed mate..yes indeed. Hems and haws importantly. Of course, I don't have a clew wot yer on 'bout..I'm only a helpless consumer after all...I wasn't born to think...

heh

K

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2002-06-01 08:28 PM


Walt darling boy, your writing is always deeply meaningful it has subtle nuances throughout it that lead the reader deeper into the thoughts of you.

As always darling boy your writing is extremely good, you have a way of writing the lines between and illuming some very important questions.

Very well written


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-06-01 08:34 PM


You ain't fussy Walt you're just good man!
Important study. Elephants are the only animal that can't jump.......Have you ever listened to "Walkin The Dog"  by Wilson Pickett.....I been lied too all these years...
that's why I like the honesty of your work!!
Keep them surveys comin!

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