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It Must Be Fantasy
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It Must Be Fantasy |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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It Must Be Fantasy While gazing into clear, blue sky my thoughts all drift to you As the winds play their lullaby to dreams of you, I’m drew A tender touch is all I crave from one with love to share Each trial of this life we’ll brave with love beyond compare As deep feelings are set ablaze fresh hopes start to conceive I open my heart to embrace the magic that you weave A passion flowing from within casts a spell over me So now the story will begin it must be fantasy Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
some fantasys are great Karen! beautiful write. Hugs. Like a red brick, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karen, Very nice fantasy. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
only fantasy surreal dreams and their feelings but I'm not asleep Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So now the story will begin it must be fantasy Sounds like a beautiful fantasy, Karen...I hope it turns into reality for you.  ~ fantasy hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, It must be, enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's a pretty darn nice fantasy all the same! Glad it's happened to a gal like you....remember whatever you wish for you just might get......That happens in a good way too you know!! Beautiful open hearted write Karen! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hopefully, ONE of these days, the fantasies will come true. Lovely write, Karen. Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...then again, is life not a fantasie in all it's trappings...? Glowing write, my friend...thanks for the read. jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If not for dreams, for fantasies...would life have all there is that we crave... Funny, I don't remember dreams well... and I still enjoy the thrill of a fantasy.. Nicely done Karen, WOW, two days in a row.. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime, my friend, you write with such exquisite passion. Every one of your poems explores the deepest regions of love. WONDERFUL POEM!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
So now the story will begin it must be fantasy HHhhmmmmm.....think fantasy was a bit safer than this but not nearly so much fun. Let's race!!!!! Desperate for changing |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The greatest thing is when fantasy becomes reality. It’s so rare, but so magical. Good to see you round here again Karen, and your romantic writings. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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