Open Poetry #20 |
Another Insomnia Poem To Keep You Awake |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Insomnia... Maybe you are just a wakeup call? A gentle nudging from the hand of Death, reminding us to use each moment wisely. Insomnia... Thank you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting thought. Hmmmmmmm. Wonder if the nudge could come from another quarter? Thought provoking ... and the last thing I wanted on a Friday was to contemplate my navel Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I liked this thought. I try to make the most of my insomnia. Seems the body sleeps when it really needs it. Shenachie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maybe, but a person's got to get some sleep sometime! I have the same problem....can't sleep so I also try to make the best of the time!! Good write! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks friends. My ISP tried to fall asleep right after posting this one. SERVER DOWN. HAHA. Interloper, yes, it could be someone/something else doing the nudging. Bridget, thanks for your reply, I agree. Yes, Eric. A body's gotta do what a body's gotta do. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me, being a VERY light sleeper, prefer to sleep and let insomina take HER wares elsewhere... Neat poem though... jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What an incredibly interesting way to put it....Magnificent...I love the direction this poem sent my thoughts in...hugs.. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How very thought provoking, Kacy.... I'll have to remember that when I can't sleep. ~ insomniac hugs Lyra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm,I think its a bit of a scary thought. But well done. I would rather sleep and dream, than lie awake looking at the ceiling alone. Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Figures...the one night I go to bed before 3:AM, you write a poem about insomnia. Loved this one, Kacy! Desperate for changing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, I always feel so bad when I have insomnia, for I love to dream where I feel free in light and joy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm sorry!!!! I didn't intend to keep anyone up all night. Insomnia can be good for you. Then again, so can sleep, deep wonderful, silky dreamy sleep. Sleep, sleep, sleep. Relax, and let your mind flow over sweetly scented rainbow gentle streams, flowing so softly and quietly you almost cannot hear the fall of the water as it tumbles and flows over the edges of the gentle cliffs. Are you asleep yet? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-31-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, It sure is keeping me up! |
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