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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Carousel Weavers ~*Marge Tindal*~  Carousel weavers of the night Spun silk lays in sheerest delight Sparkling threads across the lawn Night's crochet to greet the dawn~ Round the mound of daffodil 'Neath lazy daisies on the hill Laced o'er meadowing in adorn Milling night-workers covered my morn~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely, Marge.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love that title Marge! It's a real eye catcher. Amazing those webs aren't they? Delightful write! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautiful, Marge...I especially love the imagery here Sparkling threads across the lawn Night's crochet to greet the dawn~  ~ spidery hugsLyra |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You see the beauty in everything, Marge! Cor |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your words work magic This is intriguing Superb LIz |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Marge , Words woven with grace Yes I agree , those webs look like intricate lace Hope |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
beautiful woven words, loved this Margie ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair to be such a good writer when I can’t manage to soar on the wings of soul Hmmm? I forgive you because this is utterly utterly perfect. Absolutely perfect but that is to be expected, an elegant and seamlessly flow of sunlight and star shadow, but what else can I expect from you, YOUR writing is inarguably one of the most stunning example of form style and content. Just like you Margie girl, your writing is exceptionally good. You do know I utterly love this don’t you? I thought you’d pick up my subtle nuances there, you have always been exceptionally perspicacious.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A true poet can write about any subject, and you do this so gracefully sweet Marge. This poem is so cool!! Like a red brick, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love this, Marge - It's absolutely wonderful - and the graphic is a great enhancement. I like your night weaver better than mine... I woke up to a brandy new web wrapped about my orchid plant.. I evicted that little guy in short order...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Stay off my path!!! Your web of grace Feels downright icky Across my face! I hate to be Destroyer of home - Please do your weaving Where I don't roam! We will pause in our reflection of Marge's wonderful poem for suthern's mind to ramble. *G* I do love this, Marge... very much. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Mighty pretty!! Hugs! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Beautifully done Marge! Brought back memories of early mornings with dew misted webs that used to grace my lawns too, and it was a sight to behold...the layout was superb! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Must be the first time I have thought of spider webs as beautiful! Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thanks hon~ ETHome~ They are indeed intriguingly arranged across the lawn ... so pretty when dewdrops lay in sparkle across them~ Lyra~ I just loved the beauty of the intricately draped beauty ... caught the sun in reflecting~ Thank you sweet lady~ Corinne~ Oh ... I sure try~  Love ya' gal~ LovelyLizzieLady~ The night workers did the 'magic' ... I just got to enjoy it and share it with words~ Thanks sweetie~ Hope~ Oooh, I thank you so much~ Tracie~ So glad to know you enjoyed it my friend~ MarshaLove~ OKAY ... I'll do the Haiku class in September !!!  LOL ... you tickle the daylights out of me~ I love you~ GentleSpirit~ Thank you very much ... can't help penning them when they fall slap-dab in the middle of my inkwell ! Nan~ LOL ! Eviction is a 'gentle' term ...~  SuthernCrackUp~ You've got me *laughing* You show no mercy ! Now cut that out ... but ... I LOVE your ramble ! Ahem ! Try a different 'rambling' path ?? Perhaps VIA FLORIDA !!!!! MartieSis~ Mighty sweet of you to say so gal~ Dulcinea~ So happy to stir a memory of such beauty~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Now THAT makes me HAPPY~ Thank you for seeing them through my eye-thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What pretty things those insect death traps Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Enjoyed the poem and the picture. Webs ae such amazing things and really beautifully made as you have expressed. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ LOL ... thanks, I think~ BettyLou~ I would 'know' that you'd find the beauty in the weaving~ Love n' *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'Sparkling threads across the lawn...' what a great description and image. And I love to see them dew spinkled as the sun hits them. Beautiful poem and great graphic. I hate walking through them though! Yuky icky, sticky! :-) Love ya, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sounds like my wife, though the grass is carpeted floor, the flowers are bound to cloth, and the not so silken threads come off a spoon - she has been know to greet the dawn while working the threads she weaves though... Neat write and idea, my friend. jwesley |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A lovely poem, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiGal~ LOL at 'icky' ... I was so fascinated by the sparkle ... my eyes became my feet and I walked the path with adoration~ JWesley~ Sounds like a very talented wife ... lucky you~ SuzieQ~ Thanks hon~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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