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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-05-30 01:44 PM



Location Of Dreams

Watching the waterfall
I drifted back in time
Remembering when
Your hand held mine

Walking water’s edge
Along with river flow
Again thoughts drifted
Where we used to go

Waters tumbling forth
Mist sprays my face
One last glance back
It was a special place

Once our own utopia
Love glistening free
A waterfall cascading
Flowing continuously

Waterfall to the river
To winding streams
We kept our secrets
Location of dreams


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1 posted 2002-05-30 02:09 PM


Hope, this flows so nicely, a beautiful waterfall of words.
HopeS
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2 posted 2002-05-30 09:49 PM


thank you for your reply , yes I love watching waterfalls , they can be so inpiring
Hope

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-05-31 09:21 AM


A lovely poerm about a lovely thought in a lovely setting

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2002-05-31 10:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love waterfalls so so much, they are so heavenly to me! (kiss on cheek) May you always find all your dreams around you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-31 10:08 PM


This flows so nicely in a couple of different ways....beautiful writing!
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displaced
6 posted 2002-06-05 05:06 AM


I had a place like that...
Kethry
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7 posted 2002-06-05 05:33 AM


Hope,
this flowed so well I'm surprised I wasn't wet at the end of it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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8 posted 2002-06-05 06:58 AM


Love this topic Hope....I am a sucker for
waterfalls, and flowing streams....and all
that goes with it...

Lovely write..

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-06-05 07:20 AM


Very nice Hope...James
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