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Caressed From Your Touch (thank you Interloper...you inspire me)
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Caressed From Your Touch (thank you Interloper...you inspire me) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Caressed From Your Touch Silently I sigh warmth begins to flow Softly I’ll reply when I say hello You speak with your pen words of love you write Reading you again gives me great delight Whispers from within carry to my ears Starts my heart to spin drying all my tears I feel the ice melt from words saying much Healing how I felt caressed from your touch Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, A delight to read. Enjoyed |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
simply beautiful... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
S..i..g..h I am proud to have had any part in the creation of this wonderful piece  Is this what one calls "coming back with a BANG?" I think so! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-30-2002 02:08 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah, so beautiful. I agree, Interloper can really write of love. But no one shines brighter than Startime. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely title and content Karen. It feels so good to write from inspiration doesn't it! This is a very enjoyable read! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Whadayamean no one can shine brighter than Startime?!?! OK, ok, I agree ... except OK, I agree ... period! Interloper, let go of my arm! Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (05-30-2002 05:47 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl what a delight it is to read your writing. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it. The depth of the moment is encapsulated in this brilliant jewel of writing. In other words I love it utterly I’ve missed you darling girl welcome home the place hasn’t been the same without you    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Karen. And I agree he is a very inspirational guy Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You speak with your pen words of love you write Reading you again gives me great delight He is good, isn't he...lol! So's this. Very cool! Desperate for changing |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, it's so nice to be able to read you once again. That Interloper sure is an inspiration!  ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes, we need something like this, from someone else...to help us in our day's journey, even over roads untraveled or somewhat bumpy... I am glad you felt that and were inspired to write this... HUGS lady... |
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