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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2002-05-29 07:58 PM

Take me up in soaring flight
on glossier wing of sheer delight
Carry me far to great beyond
of hidden mists and magic wand

Over seas and waving plain
hidden valleys or pirates Main
Leave behind realities door
with all the problems of life galore

Wrap me with the touch of love
with the brightness of sky shining above
A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave

Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can’t be, for you are in my sight

So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-29 08:04 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you and your love forever soar on wings of love and find paradise and comfort in heaven here on earth! (sigh) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-05-29 08:21 PM

So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ah dear Logan, how you made me smile with this one tonight!!
Climb aboard my magic carpet and we shall soar
above the clouds without a care...
take my hand, we're almost there!

Magical, mystical...all the ingredients I love.
Into my library this keeper goes.
*A sigh, a smile, and a gentle hug*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-05-29 08:26 PM

quote:
Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can’t be, for you are in my sight

And where have you been, storyteller? We've needed a stick on the fire, it's been too long since the last one, and the embers were asking for more glow...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-05-29 08:32 PM

Logan

You will have a long line of lovely lasses with their hands out ready to go with you...I'll be one of them. Hugs for this enchanting poem.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-05-29 08:38 PM

forgot the library thingey...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-05-29 08:41 PM

the whole thing is stunning
but my fav line is.....

"as life begins in tender anew"

GOD it is just beautiful...helen

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-05-29 08:55 PM

Logan, I think this poem just put more
glow to Sunshine's fire....

And mine and a few others...

Superb!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-05-29 09:42 PM

"Over seas and waving plain
hidden valleys or pirates Main
Leave behind realities door
with all the problems of life galore"

That really soars!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-05-30 03:14 PM

Wrap me with the touch of love
with the brightness of sky shining above
A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave

Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can't be, for you are in my sight

So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
=====================================

so where does a moth book her flight?

Logan...this is poetically lovely as it gets...a cadenced kissed gem from your gifed pen.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2002-05-30 04:48 PM

forever comes to a chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
===============
I love it. Wonderful piece.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

11 posted 2002-05-30 10:38 PM

Lovely stuff, Logan, hon.

Metaphysical or real work soaring?

What have you been up to lately?

Cor

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2002-05-30 10:46 PM

Logan
This poem really does soar with super uplifting lines....good write!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2002-06-01 07:43 AM

Needs to fly again,
as well as placed gently
on library shelf...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2002-06-03 11:05 PM

Oh this is so beautiful!

"A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave"

love that line!!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2002-06-03 11:11 PM

Hello Logan

Your words always send me soaring and I have always loved the way you write. Your words always bring a gentle calm and are filled with love from a very special heart. I hope things are fine with you.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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