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MIdsummerRain
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0 posted 2002-05-29 01:25 AM


Whisps of clouds roam
The Heavens so fair
The soft curls & Snow White
Locks of Angels Hair
Stars that are but Bits of Sand
Upon the distant beaches in the sky
Remind me so - of the Pearl
That twinkles in HIS eye

Upon the Farthest Shores of -
The universe vast
Beauty & Understanding are
Shifting in the Shadow SHE cast
The lovely Flowers of Spring
& the little Birds that sing
Remind me so - of the Happiness
SHE brings

The Fresh Air of a Winters Eve
& the Moon Above
Join together & become the
Music of their Love...
The Sweetest of Lifes Melodies
are sung by Hearts tuned True...
For One is a number...
Divided by Two

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

© Copyright 2002 Rayne Leigh - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-29 08:25 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just smiled all throughout reading your lovely words just thinking of those cute little birds and little boys and girls happily playing with Mother Nature, guarded by angels he sent. (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

P.S: I love your e-mails, I'm sorry if I haven't replied yet but will do so very very soon! (smiles and hugs)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-29 04:42 PM


perfect. . . you show the two sides very well here. . .

I like the play between the one and the other. . . the secrets that are here. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-05-29 06:56 PM


I like this, very nicely done.
Sandra

MIdsummerRain
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4 posted 2002-05-29 11:45 PM


You touch my heart as well, Sweet Noah
Perfect Sven?!?!? You certainly know how to make a girl smile!
Sandra, I live on The Shores of Alone as well my friend...
~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

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