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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 27


0 posted 2002-05-28 04:32 PM


This is my first time at this so here I go.


   Never Knowing You

  I give you my heart
  I give you my life
  Never knowing you

  We got through a year
  We got through 5 months
  All this time
  I never knew you

  I wanted to live my life
  With you takin care
  But I never treated you right
  Never showed you I cared
  
  Now you feel we should give up
  We just shouldn't care
  Becuase I never knew you
  And didn't seem liked I cared

  I saw some of you
  And I might not be able to handle it right now
  But i gave you my life
  My heart
  My love
  Never knowing you
  
  We went through many pains
  And I would do it again
  If could do it knowing you  



© Copyright 2002 Hopeless Romantic - All Rights Reserved
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-05-28 04:37 PM


I am sorry your hurt but I like it.
Welcome to Passions.
-Neala

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-05-28 05:05 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh my, I'm so sorry you had to endure this kind of heartache, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, you have come to the right place for you are not alone and many can relate to this wonderful debut I'm sure! (sigh) Welcome to Passions, sweet Hopeless Romantic, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-28-2002 05:06 PM).]

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
3 posted 2002-05-28 05:10 PM


I do believe many of us have said the same
thoughts at one time or another....You
certainly are not alone...

Welcome to Passions...hope to see more from
you...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-05-28 05:34 PM


Yes it takes two with a commitment to go through all the ups and downs and still have a desire to get to know the other...James
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-05-28 05:54 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-05-28 07:17 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2002-05-28 07:32 PM


The pain of love can be a difficult thing and I hope love adorns your heart again.
Welcome to Passions.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

kinson
Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
8 posted 2002-06-10 07:28 PM


Wow, thats really good.  Welcome, its chris.  Rachel didnt tell me your name, i just figured it out.  Hope to read more, so I will.
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