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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-11 11:16 PM

Reach
By: Noah Eaton
2/6/02

When I wake up from a dream
I embrace the sunlight
I pray to the lord above
To bring a sparkle to my eyes

A true love
I yearn to hold to my heart
That I could nurture like a mother
And never fall apart

Because there is a hole
Deep inside of me
Finally I have found something
That can make me complete

So reach me, my love
Have faith in me
Reach me, my love
I've tossed and turned in my sleep

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed

I say my prayers
Before I go to bed
Wishing to hold you close forever
And someday be wed

When I cry
I always think of you
To reassure myself
To keep myself from feeling blue

I would sacrifice anything
Just to hear you laugh
You are my Guinevere
You fill me with rapture at last

So reach me, my love
Have faith in me
Reach me, my love
I've tossed and turned in my sleep

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed

Whenever you feel sad, reach me
Just reach me
Come on, just reach me
Where our hearts can no longer bleed

All this time these tears I cry
They keep flowing, in all this time
All this time I wonder why
Can I make you mine?
All this time I've heard you cry
I just want to hold you and make everything alright

I always feel bad when I see you cry
I just wish that I could comfort you
Kiss away your tears when everything seems wrong
Hug you close and cry with you when you're feeling blue
I just want to be your savior of your heart
You say you hate yourself even when I love you
I just want to make you the happiest girl in the world
Just tell me how you feel, and I promise I'll do what I can to set you free

Can you reach me, darling?
I'll take you to where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Where our hearts can no longer bleed
Can you reach me, darling
To where the heavens sing
Can you reach me, darling
Before I fall into the ashes of broken dreams…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-11-2002 11:17 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-04-11 11:39 PM

Hi Noah,
A love song torn...I found I read it softer as I neared the end. ThisDiamond

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-04-12 04:48 AM

Very nice...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-04-12 05:03 AM

Noah, my dear, I don't really know what to say, this is kind of sad and kind of hopeful too. You are just so emotional...and I like that in a man

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2002-04-13 12:19 PM

Hi Noah,

You are truly a special soul and I enjoyed reading this beauty, so full of emotions and caring, wonderful work.

Love, Cerenity

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-04-13 12:29 PM

Noah~

you have a heart of pure gold, sadly written, almost to a haunting glow, but beautiful just the same...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2002-04-13 12:50 PM

Sweet thoughts here

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

7 posted 2002-04-13 12:55 PM

Sad, but full of hope.Your emotions always pull me into your writes.Wonderfully done.
Peaches

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2002-04-13 01:11 PM

a song straith from the heart, and show your innermost feeling very well....you are a wonderful and warm person.

((((warm hugs)))
Charisma

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

9 posted 2002-04-13 01:46 PM

Very sweet, Noah.

((Noah))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

10 posted 2002-04-13 02:06 PM

Noah, this is simply georgeous! Beautiful, sad, and touching also. Just keep reaching and it will all be worth it.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

11 posted 2002-04-13 02:28 PM

Your words made my heart stop, I don't know why perhaps you mentioned that she was your Guinevere..I'm sure any girls fantasy, I know it's mine..it was sad though, Again another poem having me all friggen choked up!!! Your words remind me of someone and something..it's quite freaky in all honesty...*deja vu*

Kristen

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-04-13 06:40 PM

...Beautiful !!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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