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Last Chance
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Last Chance Drifting in the place Of tomorrow’s dreams She found a golden promise Holding it before the light She stared into it Half believing it and yet……… Not Daring to trust her luck Why should she Believe in dreams now? They had never Come true Never once Had her dreams of Wanting and having Turned into Truth…….. Not once Should she return it? Should she? Simply replace it there On the ground Where it was Half concealed In the Remnants of Yesterdays sorrows Or last nights Tears Should she? Would she? What would you do? Would you slide the Golden promise Into your heart Hoping its light would Warm you and chase Away the sadness Or would you replace it? Knowing you aren’t Ever that lucky You decide for her Yes or No……. Be careful how you Choose For this might be Her last Chance Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a tough choice....and such a tough feeling for her... Decisions, decisions....sometimes the heart makes decisions for us...those that our mind won't let us.... Maybe, just follow the heart... Beautiful poem...very nice Krissy |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big huggggssssss) Oh Krissy, this is sindeed such a tough situation, I encourage her to follow her heart and there she will find the answer! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my thoughts are with her, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Krissy I don't think you can go wrong if you follow your heart and your instincts. This was very well written and much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, yes, yes ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, don't necessarily agree you can't go wrong...following...but sometimes it's still the best way to go....enjoyed.. jwesley |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I've enjoyed reading this poem Krissy. On the poem, the key is to be true to oneself :-) mycafe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: This is what stuck out best, Krissy...would you? Why wouldn't you...? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyGal~ No doubt about it ... I'd ... 'slide the Golden promise Into your heart Hoping its light would Warm you and chase Away the sadness' Yeppers ! That's what I did alright~ *HUGS* ***Have I mentioned that I CAN'T WAIT for September to get here ???????????????????  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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