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Royal Blues
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Royal Blues |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Atop thrones, glint emerald eyes stately sitters, pick occasional sties perfect stone, no visual blemish nyloned feet, pets come to cherish. Portraits of men, all Dorian Grays thought ugliness would be held at bay; paid for misdeeds, good looks gave way pets at polished shoes, now gone stray. Follow the feet, note their composure stately grace has over-reached exposure nyloned feet caress those polished shoes distinct royals sing melodious blues. castles grand, closets full of ancient bones children near pets, their mouths with scones; emerald eyes, radiant rubies on royals crowns rest on cushions, atop thrones renowned. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martin, this is good...and I enjoyed the read...there's a lot in here...it's going to take another read...in the morning  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Excellent write, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martin...just wanted you to know I have devoured...will be back in the morning to digest once again this powerful write. ~Hugs Nite~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
alot to read between the lines, not the references made to the feet...and others of 'royal' descent. |
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