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On a Night Such as This
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On a Night Such as This |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
shaking, twitching, I am left alone once again by you, over the phone I hear you, there but distant uncaring, false, words a rant in my ear, I do not listen to you, speaking, on a mission to be free, I cannot run and hide, weak, I am caught lost indeed, confused and blind pushing, shoving, extracting my mind secured and bound, trapped in heart crying, confused, will we never part -- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That's not a very comforatble spot to be in, is it? It's a well written moment of emotional bondage. |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Very intense and well written poem. Distance in any form be it emotional or physical can make one very unsure of what lies ahead. I hope all looks brighter in the future. |
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