Open Poetry #20 |
Tonight is Villanelle night |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It is the same here every night I'm hanging here for my pc And so against the sleep I fight Am I addicted? Yes I might Sometimes I wish I wouldn't be It is the same here every night During day and during night I have to do so much you see And so against the sleep I fight In sunset's fading orange light I work on this darned pedigree It is the same here every night But I'll be filled with little pride When it is done, and done by me And so against the sleep I fight But I'm no fool, I know alright That really I'll be never free It is the same here every night And so against the sleep I fight Again I apologize for not replying too often to all your lovely verses. It's 3.00 am overhere and I have to work tomorrow, ARGHHHHH A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (04-11-2002 08:53 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bravo, Titia....a wonderful vilanelle!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Titia! *S* When I go without sleep, I'm just tired and grumpy... you write words that delight. *S* Well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ You talent runneth all over the pages blue~ A lovely Villanelle from you~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
As I finished reading this, I knew this was wonderful. But, praise from Balladeer? -That's the word! Poet, take a bow! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sweet Deer, you mean you gave me a straight A???? Suthern, ahhhh I get tired and grumpy sometimes too, well, that's what my hubby tells me LOL Marge, my big kiss is runneth towards you Melissa dear, I'm already walking besides my shoes, as they say overhere. Thank you friends Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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