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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-05-26 08:23 PM





Heaven Sent



It is best
To look at clouds
With unsullied eyes

To let one’s imagination
Roam, to see sights
With a lucid heart

Question yourself,

From where do those beams of
Light come,
That they would shimmer
Before the beauty that lays
Ahead of them…

See her in supple recline,
Lifting her face to greet his…
As he bends o’er her
Reaching to embrace,
To bring rumbles
In the thunder
Of his
Lightening heat…

Oh, that love be made
In heaven,
Where lightening
And thunder reign…


~*~
Photography:  K. R. Jungel



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-26 08:26 PM


Oh, that love be made
In heaven,
Where lightening
And thunder reign…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love this Karilea....just beautiful!
Yes, I see the lovers in the clouds.
This ending gave me goosebumps.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-05-26 08:44 PM


lovely poem of some of nature's elements


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3 posted 2002-05-26 08:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I am always amazed and enthralled by he thunder and lightning that He bestows upon us all and I always see it as a powerful union between two lovers embracing in magic! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may you and your love always be a match made in the stars, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-26 10:26 PM


yes... *s*
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5 posted 2002-05-26 10:38 PM


A single clap of thunder and one lightning
bolt will probably be enough for me...

Boootifull pome Shining One...enjoyed...

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-05-26 10:48 PM


Very well done. Pictures within pictures.
ThisDiamond

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7 posted 2002-05-26 11:46 PM


I think I'll never look at the clouds the same way again Karilea. Beautiful picture...beautiful words.

Everything is possible in the game of life
    (Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

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8 posted 2002-05-27 03:51 PM


Really like this Sunshine...James
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9 posted 2002-05-27 04:25 PM


With sun in light behind, a cloud is beautiful, so to your words.
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10 posted 2002-05-27 05:07 PM


liked it
Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-05-27 05:33 PM


That is an AWESOME photo, Karilea...and the poem fits it perfectly....also excellent.

I like the idea of love being made in heaven, and I love the way you write about looking at clouds with an open mind...I have always done that.  
When I look at the sky, sometimes I see clouds, sometimes, I see mashed potatoes and sometimes I see whipped cream.....
Maybe thats why I always have to diet.

Thank you for sharing your artistry with us.

~ mashed potatoe hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2002-05-27 09:01 PM


Hello Karilea

Such beautiful images you have given us.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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Beautiful thoughts, Kari
Sandra

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14 posted 2002-05-28 06:31 AM


ms sunshine
enjoyed looking up
from your eyes

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