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Heaven Sent |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Heaven Sent It is best To look at clouds With unsullied eyes To let one’s imagination Roam, to see sights With a lucid heart Question yourself, From where do those beams of Light come, That they would shimmer Before the beauty that lays Ahead of them… See her in supple recline, Lifting her face to greet his… As he bends o’er her Reaching to embrace, To bring rumbles In the thunder Of his Lightening heat… Oh, that love be made In heaven, Where lightening And thunder reign… ~*~ Photography: K. R. Jungel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh, that love be made In heaven, Where lightening And thunder reign… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this Karilea....just beautiful! Yes, I see the lovers in the clouds. This ending gave me goosebumps. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lovely poem of some of nature's elements  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I am always amazed and enthralled by he thunder and lightning that He bestows upon us all and I always see it as a powerful union between two lovers embracing in magic! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may you and your love always be a match made in the stars, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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PaulValjean Junior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 10Fl. |
yes... *s* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A single clap of thunder and one lightning bolt will probably be enough for me... Boootifull pome Shining One...enjoyed... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done. Pictures within pictures. ThisDiamond |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think I'll never look at the clouds the same way again Karilea. Beautiful picture...beautiful words. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really like this Sunshine...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
With sun in light behind, a cloud is beautiful, so to your words. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
That is an AWESOME photo, Karilea...and the poem fits it perfectly....also excellent. I like the idea of love being made in heaven, and I love the way you write about looking at clouds with an open mind...I have always done that. When I look at the sky, sometimes I see clouds, sometimes, I see mashed potatoes and sometimes I see whipped cream..... Maybe thats why I always have to diet.  Thank you for sharing your artistry with us.  ~ mashed potatoe hugsLyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea Such beautiful images you have given us. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful thoughts, Kari Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine enjoyed looking up from your eyes |
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