Open Poetry #20 |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
peaks o'er waterlines, mountains mirrored from the depths rock and water meet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent one Martin! Enjoy your writing much... Need more time to read in here. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thankyou Nancy, alot comes from just putting the visual into words |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful description, Martin. ~lots of hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
much appreciated, Lyra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ecrivan...OUTSTANDING HAIKU!!! Really was WOWED!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am SO glad I did not miss this... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nature is a beautiful teacher...rock and water meet, like men and women. I like this. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Diamond, One can read of the strength and grace of the opposite sexes in this. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is a fabulous haiku, sweet friend, I just love how you depict nature through words, I love the mountains and know this majestic sight so very well! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a gorgeous description, bravo! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ecrivan~ This is lovely imagery, simplistically stated~ VERY nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Marge, it is quite simplistic and I do Haiku occasionally too Melissa, thanks for buzzing in |
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