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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-05-26 01:45 PM


I'm sorry if you missed reading my words a lot lately, I'm just finishing up my last school year, YAY!!!

(For my love Joanna...who I think and dream about every day and love so so much! )

The Love Flute
By: Noah Eaton
5/26/02

Come to my window, my sweet ladylove
Hear this song my spirit cries
This oriole within warbles to your beauty
Together may we make verses for sweet life

Wrap yourself in my blanket I wield
Hold me close to your beating heart I dote upon
Hear the sparrows amass between our hedonistic spirits
Fluttering their wings in every tear and every smile fond

Through the Mother Spirit Wind, I recite my billet-doux
Where the sheep will cry and the horse will invoke
You are my lady sparrow I fancy to nest beside
Your heart is the one I'll always hold

Through the Great Spirit, my heart cries in mirth
Each time I hold your hand, looking into your soft opal eyes
Come to my window on this electric whimsical eve
In the song of the Love Flute may we be lovingly intwined...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-26-2002 01:46 PM).]

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skyshine
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1 posted 2002-05-26 02:02 PM


Congrats on finishing up your senior year! It's a blast isn't it? And what a beautiful poem for Joanna. Good work, Noah!

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-05-26 02:05 PM


Contratulations, Noah...on your graduation.
and also on a lovely poem.

~ graduation hugs


Lyra

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-26-2002 02:06 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-05-26 02:06 PM


Noah sweetie!  Where have you been?
I've missed my sidekick.
Finishing your last year of school??!!
I'm so proud of you!
WOW!  Now that is way cool!
Joanna will love this piece I know.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-26 04:39 PM


Very nice Noah...James
ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-26 05:10 PM


Noah you sure can write a romantic love poem. I give you full points for such beauty of heart!
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6 posted 2002-05-26 06:18 PM


Noah honey congratulations on finishing school. You must be so excited and proud. Your friend is gonna loooove this poem. Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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7 posted 2002-05-26 07:18 PM



Congratulations, Senior!  May this year
keep you warm with memories
and may you have your plans spread
out before you...for even though
one or two may get mislaid, still,
you will not get anywhere without them.

deleeme
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8 posted 2002-05-26 08:18 PM


Noah,
I believe the world is a better place
because you live in it,
Your Love for Joanna & for all is so refreshing and appealing- how could anyone say no- or no thank you. Congrats on your scholastic milestone as well, may it be
a stepping stone to a great & happy future-a place where I know you will spread your special kind of love!



God bless you, Friend,
       David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

SmartChick
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9 posted 2002-05-26 09:11 PM


Congradulations Noah on your graduation. This is a beautiful poem for Joanna. I know she'll love it.
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