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A Villanelle Sounds Hard To Do a villanelle I think? |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
A Villanelle Sounds Hard To Do A villanelle sounds hard to do But I think I’ll try it Balladeer I want to see if I can do it too This villanelle form will I rue Will it cause me pain and fear? A villanelle sounds hard to do How difficult can it be to do? Will it bring a frown or tear? I want to see if I can do it too Why is it such a strain to you? Will darkness of the soul appear? A villanelle sounds hard to do With words that don’t ring true And lines that seem to disappear I want to see if I can do it too You’re right this poem I can’t do A simple thing to cause such fear A villanelle sounds hard to do I want to see if I can do it too Krissy I really don’t know if this is a villanelle or not, mum couldn’t tell me as she’s never done one. The template I copied came from ‘Deer’s I Can’t Write A Villanelle If I got it wrong I’m sorry. Please forgive me, love you all ciao xxxxx And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! This is indeed a villanelle, and a very wonderful one in my opinion, sweet friend, I love all your poems and I know Balladeer will be delighted to read this too! (smiles) You never cease to amaze us, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lemmee tell you, Krissy...you done real good! You followed the form of a villanelle to the letter! The meter a villanelle needs to maintain is lacking but, for a new poet and a first attempt, you get my total admiration!  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Looks to me like you did this very well, Krissy. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Wonderful...delightful....amazing....outstanding...have I forgotten anything?? You did a wonderful job on this Krissy,you are braver than I in tackling this!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This was great, krissy! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, this is oustanding, im not sure what all components a villanelle should have, but from appearances, it seems to me you did a pretty darn good job! wonderful write. take care. love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look at you go...and you got a tip of the hat as well...nothing can stop you now... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ I admire the spirit that keeps you challenging yourself~ Good show, girlie~  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Krissy~ You met the challenge well! Good going girly-girl!*hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Just read Balladeer again. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
HOORAY for Krissy! |
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