Open Poetry #20 |
Morning Prayer |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Morning Prayer On the rise of slope I stand Morning dew greets my lips To the north I face the land On the right I lift my hand Encompassing the rise of sun On the left I lift my hand Full moon sits in my palm All is calm, all is calm. “O Great Father Earth below my feet Sun held in my right hand Moon rests in my left hand For all that you have given This world For your people Know that I thank you.” On the rise of slope I stand Morning dew greets my lips To the north I face the land On the right I lift my hand Encompassing the rise of sun On the left I lift my hand Full moon sits in my palm All is calm, all is calm. .... ... .. . ~*~ from 9/14/2000 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Aw, now. This IS peace. I could see the image of the sun worshipper--you captured the calm perfectly! No graphics needed with this. I SAW. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
very spiritual with a twist of mysticism in it..much enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I could 'hear' the silence and 'feel' the calm here. Wonderful morning prayer...very uplifting! ~Hugs~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
this gives me some peace tonight thanks How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sunshine...james |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
now I shake me up to wake and pray the lord to not forsake give me this day my daily bucks and guide my ride to starbucks (grin..) no disrespect intended enjoyed your work ms shine |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is lovely Sunshine!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
People should have to memorize this prayer, and say it each morning. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sunshine, you inspire me with your prayer. I must answer with a few whispers of my own. There I am there I feel her morning prayer Radiating Satiating The air I am there. She is heard God listens to her word Radiating Satiating God hears her prayer I am there. There. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is a wonderfully spiritual poem, sweet friend, I saw the rise of the sun symbolic to a new day with so much promises to behold and the moon like a mysterios smile that will always bask upon us with His blanket of loves light! (sigh) This is such a beautiufl prayer, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Something drew me to this..Call me crazy..but judging by the date you included, you did write it on my birthday two years ago?..It is heart speak and vision..You are wonderful. Sincerely, Regina |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful spirit in this, Karilea...it shines! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Did I ever tell you I love it best when you radiate that internal sunshine? ~* Sharon *~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Beautiful morning prayer using the whole body. What a way to start the day! Shenachie |
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