SHE...is actuality (Kamla)

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-05-26 01:27 AM

she gives voice
to yearning
wild
she is a choice
of thing
defiled

she is green field
and innocence
of first things bloom--
lust unspent...

she is the inner thought
on path...
every footstep stomping
wrath

she is the sparking
of the edge
all things dreamed
all things dread

she exists
kaleidoscope
in the dark
she's promised hope

she is wonder
I've not seen
she's every bitter
part of me
and all the sweetness
becoming...

SHE...is actuality.

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2002-05-26 01:30 AM

"she exists
kaleidoscope
in the dark
she's promised hope"

I wish I wrote that! What a cool thought...

wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2002-05-26 01:31 AM

Kamla cool and so are you(l)

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-05-26 01:42 AM

Bravo!! She is all that!!! This is inspired!

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

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Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2002-05-26 02:00 AM

she exists
kaleidoscope
in the dark
she's promised hope

i could say a lot of things about l'il k - but this works very well by itself.

hugs midi-k

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-05-26 02:04 AM

Damn fine write Karen

tracie66
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6 posted 2002-05-26 03:40 AM

WOW!!!
Fine write, loved it

~HUGS~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe

ethome
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7 posted 2002-05-26 04:43 AM

Very very well done Celeste!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-05-26 07:41 AM

Ah Serene one...look what you've done!
This is wonderful...and she will be
so pleasantly surprised...

Severn
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9 posted 2002-05-26 07:41 AM

Awwwwwwwwwww...

awwwwwwwwwww..!!!!

...

Don't know what I did to deserve this, but thank you...this is so special - and wow - you've described some of me in a nutshell..although I like to circumvent nutshells

she is the inner thought
on path...
every footstep stomping
wrath

she is the sparking
of the edge
all things dreamed
all things dread

she exists
kaleidoscope
in the dark
she's promised hope

this my god...where ever did that astuteness come from?? It's like you took a light and looked right on in this little head of mine..beaming here...

Karen - I don't know why you did this, but I'm grateful, and very honoured...and I love ya..(and miss you too btw madam...)

huggles

K

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2002-05-26 09:22 AM

Neautiful and perfect gifting of your words me twin...
had to smile at Kams "astuteness" comment...
yes...me girlie has the eyes that see on thru.

I remembering being one and the same ...
closer even than the heat and the flame.

Tom Kimmel

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-05-26 09:26 AM

Karen~

I have to say, I dont know her very well....but I look forward to learning about her and her poetry.....very touching....

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Martie

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12 posted 2002-05-26 10:47 AM

Karen--This a lovely and honest look into a heart so dear, so clear. Amazing, you!

Cirrus
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13 posted 2002-05-27 02:04 AM

Indeed SHE is

ya did good Luscious

Mysteria

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14 posted 2002-05-27 02:23 AM

Now how do you do that? That was absolutely incredible writing Karen. And I don't know Kamla all that well either, but I like what I do know TONS!

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

kaile

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15 posted 2002-05-27 07:12 AM

serenity,

she is the inner thought
on path...
every footstep stomping
wrath

i think this describes Kamla well...i have always admired her brutal honesty in her work and her willingness to reveal the more painful bits of herself

kewl write

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

16 posted 2002-05-27 11:13 PM

Yes... it truly is she

Brilliant, really!!

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

serenity blaze
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17 posted 2002-05-27 11:24 PM

LATE AGAIN...I'd like to thank you all, but it almost seems silly to do so...Kamla is really the focus here. She's been a true friend, uncompromising and honest, yet compassionate. She has strength but is not unyielding...A lady of talent and strength, and were she from my part of the world? We would call her a "steel magnolia!" For YOU, k...for YOU.

(huggles---and how do I know ya? I READ WHAT YOU WRITE!!!

)

k--just had to edit a typo...sigh...surprised actually, that ya didn't MAKE me...lol

[This message has been edited by serenity (05-29-2002 02:42 AM).]

Severn
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18 posted 2002-05-28 01:49 AM

...

Dunno what to say luv...

Thanks again? I'm humbled? Honoured? Glad to call you my friend?

All of them...

K

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

19 posted 2002-05-28 12:24 PM

I love it! What a beautiful and thoughtful tribute K. You are a true sweetheart, and Kamla is a lovely soul.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Sven

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East Lansing, MI USA

20 posted 2002-05-28 04:13 PM

yes. . . all of that. . . and more. . .

great work. . .

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Jamie
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Blue Heaven

21 posted 2002-05-28 06:58 PM

she is a journey
and a destination
she is just as surely
every leprechaun's gold
and every colour that
leads you there...

...and she is lucky
to have friends who
write poems such as
this

hugs all around

:J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Gemini
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22 posted 2002-05-28 07:49 PM

Very excellent write!

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