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Tranquility Stare
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Tranquility Stare |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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take a look over there the at which I swear stares back at me in which I flee to make myself free from there a tranquility stare walk to a place that you wonder where you will stare take a look at that book avoid the nonsense in the nook take a peak Just not speak and write it in ink just before the brink take a look inside for you just cannot hide from those that have died |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very interseting format and the thought flow is full of poetic nuances of creativity. Too well done to let it slip off the board without a comment! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It's hard to loose someone you really liked, isn't it. I like the way you express your feelings in this poem, thanks for sharing. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The second line confuses me a little, but I'm sure once you shed some light on it, I'll understand... the remainder of the poem is good, and drew me along with it all the way... |
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PaulValjean Junior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 10Fl. |
I always like a poem that makes a statement at the end... especially when it is true.... *s*... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kellie~ I enjoyed the way you worked the words here~ Sort of felt like letting your emotions play 'touch and let go' ? Poignantly felt dear poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree with Sunshine, the second line is a little confusing....I almost sense that in the beginning, you were sort of grasping and feeling which way to go... And....welcome to Passions... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I really like the way you let your feeling flow on the paper. As they make themselves comfortable, I will be here to read you. ThisDiamond |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I don'tt hink about my poetry i let it just happen |
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