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Across The Moor of Waning Moon
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Across The Moor of Waning Moon |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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My love.. As each flower blooms, my love of thee grows. As each dawn arrives, my eyes see thy beauty beside me. Breezes off the moor carry to me thy pleasurable fragrance. Clouds above bring to mine eyes your flowing hair, your face. The sun of day glistens from your eyes as the gold of sunset matches the flow and color of your hair.. Rains fall as do my tears. Tears that flow ever endlessly till thy heart touches mine. Tears of brine that sprinkle the earth ‘neath my feet. Tears that streak a tired and weary face. Tears of love. Each step brings thee closer to mine arms. Each beat of my heart a mere echo of thine own. Blood of my veins course a raging stream of desire. My hunger can only be quelled by thy tenderness, thy touch. By thy whispered word of now, of more.. Lie in wait my love, my lady, one most fair. For I ride the night to be with thee. My steed spurred on by yet his own wants. Each of us battle weary, worn... Only a vision of thee keeps mine energies flowing, keeps desires of thee ever strong. Moon of my heart sets slow Moon of my night rides well Eve of my wait is nigh Of this love, thee I tell. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep the vision, Magnus keep the vision... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy each time I read the magic of your words I wait, just a pause, a mere heartbeat, to see if the magic will still work and it does darling boy it does. The veil of delight that you cast over my soul settles over me and again I’m swathed in the silk of your words. They entwine themselves around my soul, decorating, clearing the soul’s vision and revealing the beauty once more. Thank you darling boy this is as ever utterly utterly perfect I love it utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ.... (Magnus wiping mud out of his eyes from the ride) Attempting to see the vision of his Lady Fair.....Grit within his teeth... Patooooey.... Thank You, shining one... Mushy...darling heart...thanx again utterly so much for another utterly awesome reply. Hugs to you across the pond... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words of love flow like a tranquil stream straight to the door of my heart. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you bring full moon fever to these pages also just as you make the moon radiate with hope of love for all! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Excellent poem Magnus, I especially like the way you use your words to create a kind of old style feeling along with your wit and ingenuity. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
such words.... this is beauty ~~ Connie ~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this is wonderful. The last stanza in particular felt so good to me. Sandra |
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