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Lost Remember... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Waves lapping on a shore of sand into the gleam of shimmer’s light Peaks in fall of cresting and flow from mome’ of memory’s soulful flight Wait of the wish of walking souls Neath light of moon and red of Mars Timeless treads now washing from view cast through heavens, into the stars. In trials of life, in wish of hope In wait of kiss or touch in feel Lasting linger as whispers call trails of finger’s touches reveal Two hearts, one love, bound by one beat entwined as tendrils, running vine lost remember, once incomplete fount of lovely, surely divine. From the cosmos to waiting sea beat of one remains faithfully Breeze of dreams caress the eyes lost remember, found realize [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-24-2002 05:29 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A soft tender lovely write, enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This! was new... Neath light of moon and red of Mars Timeless treads now washing from view cast through heavens, into the stars. THAT was good! |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Two hearts, one love, bound by one beat entwined as tendrils, running vine lost remember, once incomplete fount of lovely, surely divine. Wow, that is all that I can say to that. I was moved to tears.. Thank you hun. Have to keep this one. Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry...You just keep getting better and better! This is extremely well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart I’m breathless with wonder this is simply gorgeous. YOU do KNOW I simply LOVE your writing don’t you? Such a rendering of your hearts song in this delight darling heart it is exquisite. You shine with wonder and light in this jewel. I don’t know how to express myself you simply excel darling boy, always you write beautiful flowing lines, and always they descend over my soul like a veil of wonder. I love this utterly utterly, You really are superb   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This was so exquisite and so beautiful, need I say more. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Each word and line a delight and worthy of a love so bright, a way I wish that I could write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, my pleasure..thank you... Sun...always a treat to read your replies. puts a shining smile on my face and in my eyes... LadyCat...good evening...I am most pleased you enjoyed this...Thank You! Nancy, I don't know about the better and better, but I assure you I do try harder and harder...HUGS...thanx enchanting one.. Yes, I smell it... Mushy, another book of your wonderfully accepted accolades of my humble poetry... Thanx utterly much darling girl.... Sue...Muchos Gracias dear one....your words always gleam in my eyes...Thanx bunches.. Martie...Dear Lady...IT IS I who wish I could write as you do...YOUR Poetry is pure heaven... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Shining a bit here, Magnus....and in a good way |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was simply lovely. ~* Tell someone in your family that you love them today *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (05-24-2002 09:46 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Michael...yep, the bald spot on the top of my head from the glare of lights....thanx.. Sharon, thank you, and I thoroughly enjoyed your poem from days of olde.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I continue to be amazed at how your words grow and depict such visions almost like Rembrandt's paintings or some medieval romantic setting to galaxies beyond our reach! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-24-2002 10:49 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, uh-huh...*nodding head*...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is exactly the kind of word play that I enjoy Magnus. . . you make them just flow off of the page. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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