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0 posted 2002-05-23 07:13 PM





A Soddy Song, 1868

I found the robin safely, dear
I found the robin safe
she had her babes around her dear,
she had her babes around

She sang her song of joy, my love
she sang her song of joy
for all the world surrounds her dear
for all the world surrounds

I held you in my heart close, love
I held you in my heart
for you're the one I chose, my dear
for you're the one I chose

Now dance me into night, my love
now dance me into night
I'll sing my song of joy, my love
I'll sing my song of joy


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-23 07:18 PM


I'll sing a song of joy my love
of words from lips which sing
from in the beating heart of dove
when merry bells once ring

I'll sing a song of hope, my dear
and send you this my word
A song of hope in wish of love
I'll sing of all we heard.

Beautiful song KJ....very nice...

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2 posted 2002-05-23 07:27 PM


Ooo! That's like a madrigal! Awesome, Karilea!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 2002-05-23 07:39 PM


A skipping, foot-tapping kinda song, and I hear her singing it too.   ps. the picture's pretty too.

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4 posted 2002-05-23 08:08 PM


Beautiful song Karilea,
And the picture is just perfect as well.
You know I love it!
~Hugs you!~

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5 posted 2002-05-23 11:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the repetition in this, sweet friend, this sings like a song and chirps with the beauty of robins hatching! (sigh) This is another gorgeous song from your sun-shining heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-24 01:33 AM


this is beautiful! I love your Soddy series....this is so perfect.
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