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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-23 06:45 PM


I thought I'd re-share this little bit of silliness.

-My love-
You.
Early morning sickness:
salvation.

With your dark skin,
steamy vision.
Bitterness

made creamy clean.
Warm surging.
You.

Connect thoughts
never met; heart races,
Slows.

Some stains,
surely.
Surely some stains.

But I feel so clean
that I don't notice.
I refuse to notice.

With a taste of you,
the sight of you
coalescing

and
turning -- turning
to find all the details

rich and deep,
like liquid dreams.
Oh, my love.

My cup of coffee.
We must never part.
You are always.



She said burn ... together.
-TON


Mmm... good to th' las' drop!

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-23-2002 06:46 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-23 07:10 PM


haaaa you are  a squirrelyQ


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2 posted 2002-05-23 07:14 PM


That was quite amusing!
Very well done!
And a very fun read!

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3 posted 2002-05-23 07:20 PM


Who would have ever thunk it?  Till the
last drop, eh????

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4 posted 2002-05-23 07:23 PM



This is silliness with the artful touch...
you are very clever, poet-friend...

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-05-23 07:23 PM


Glad you all enjoyed. I was goin' for a bit of deception with tha' one -- foolin' the reader that I was talkin' about a girl. Actually, this probably directly inspired Coffee girl (in Adult), but that's another story entirely...

Filled to the rim with brim!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Duncan
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6 posted 2002-05-23 08:28 PM


And as long as ya don't spill a steaming cup in your lap...so much safer than girls!  Good one, sguirrel.
bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-05-23 08:53 PM


Duncan,

Who wants safe?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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8 posted 2002-05-23 11:02 PM


LOL


wonderful words....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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9 posted 2002-05-23 11:07 PM


Good fun write here Mike!
Enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel
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10 posted 2002-05-24 12:17 PM


Thanks.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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