My love (repost from Open 13)

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-05-23 06:45 PM

I thought I'd re-share this little bit of silliness.

-My love-
You.
Early morning sickness:
salvation.

With your dark skin,
steamy vision.
Bitterness

made creamy clean.
Warm surging.
You.

Connect thoughts
never met; heart races,
Slows.

Some stains,
surely.
Surely some stains.

But I feel so clean
that I don't notice.
I refuse to notice.

With a taste of you,
the sight of you
coalescing

and
turning -- turning
to find all the details

rich and deep,
like liquid dreams.
Oh, my love.

My cup of coffee.
We must never part.
You are always.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Mmm... good to th' las' drop!

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-23-2002 06:46 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-05-23 07:10 PM

haaaa you are a squirrelyQ

M

elfin_tigress
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since 2002-05-15

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2 posted 2002-05-23 07:14 PM

That was quite amusing!
Very well done!
And a very fun read!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-05-23 07:20 PM

Who would have ever thunk it? Till the
last drop, eh????

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-05-23 07:23 PM

This is silliness with the artful touch...
you are very clever, poet-friend...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-23 07:23 PM

Glad you all enjoyed. I was goin' for a bit of deception with tha' one -- foolin' the reader that I was talkin' about a girl. Actually, this probably directly inspired Coffee girl (in Adult), but that's another story entirely...

Filled to the rim with brim!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-05-23 08:28 PM

And as long as ya don't spill a steaming cup in your lap...so much safer than girls! Good one, sguirrel.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-05-23 08:53 PM

Duncan,

Who wants safe?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2002-05-23 11:02 PM

LOL

wonderful words....

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-05-23 11:07 PM

Good fun write here Mike!
Enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-05-24 12:17 PM

Thanks.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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