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:'( love hurts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:'( love hurts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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MilchstrabeStern Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 23 |
My beliefs are lies I thought i saw it Love in your eyes Was it only my reflection? Yes, they were my beliefs, yes they were a lie, yet now i can see the truth, anda all i can do is cry.... She did not share the same feelings that i did. But, me, her, and 2 other friends, are probally the best friends this world can provide, and i will never take advantage of that. This rejection doesnt hurt as bad as i thought, for i know, shes always a friend, and a good one at that. She always has a hand to hold, and always a smile to give. They are the worlds best friends, today was my last day of school, we spent the entire day together and watched 3 movies. We had a great time.....I thank them for their love, that will never die. I thank them for being great friends, that will love me forever. And who i will love forever. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well, eyes being the mirror of the soul, It probably was just a reflection. Would have liked to see more poem And less prose rant, but emotion is difficult to bottle. Gloom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like the professor's reply! When it comes to love it's easy to lie to oneself! I appreciated the story! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I have lied to myself alot about love...I have learned not to look for it again...dreams are not reality...very well written...yes...love really does hurt.. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Love is hard to taste For the taste is so sweet and trusting and yet... Just never stop loving |
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