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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-05-23 12:30 PM



I may not be much if you have a lot
But if you have not,
I am

I’m in a state by myself
The perfect collection
I am

Bite me if you need to
Test me but remember
I am


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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-05-23 01:59 AM


Don't have a clue...but the poem is cool.
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2 posted 2002-05-23 08:05 AM


hmmm...a penny? (and ditto Duncan for the cool poem remark)
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3 posted 2002-05-23 08:10 AM


Hey PDV you are who you are and you've cleverly conveyed that point in this little jewell of a poem. We'll do fine paupers in paradise!

I've never had anyone say "bite me' so eloquently!  Hey I'm just kidding! But beware! I still have all my teeth!

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4 posted 2002-05-23 08:30 AM


Water?... It'd be very strange to bite water... but then if you didn't have any...
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2002-05-23 09:38 AM


Someone is close - the letter I was given was the letter Q.
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6 posted 2002-05-23 09:43 AM


the quarters from each state that are out now...
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7 posted 2002-05-23 10:07 AM


This is a tough letter. I have no clue! My answer would be a quarter. But, someone already said that.
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8 posted 2002-05-23 04:32 PM


yes. . . great work deVine. . . you've really taken to these very well. . .



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9 posted 2002-05-23 04:40 PM




(big huggsssssss) Yes, yes, I too agree that I think this is a quarter, this is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) This is so very clever, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-05-23 05:49 PM


Bite you? Eat you?....what?....okay, I'll see ya Saturday...okay?.....LOL....you have progressed so much since when I was young and on these boards....hey, wait a minute, I'm only 27?....You do believe me...don't ya?....LOL

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11 posted 2002-05-23 07:31 PM


I won't bore you with my 2(5) cents.

That was altogether awful. My apologies.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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12 posted 2002-05-23 07:32 PM


Sharon~

Although I think it has been stated 25 rings to me too....neat write!


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2002-05-25 10:43 AM


Just wanna know if they were right, the object being a quarter.

I looked over my entire dictionary LOL, but I couldn't anything that I wanted to bite

Titia

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Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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14 posted 2002-05-25 11:26 AM


It is a quarter....and the 'bite me' reference is to an old practice of biting a coin to see if it's real.
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