Open Poetry #20 |
Moving Moody Ring |
Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Moving Moody Ring crystals shift, colors vary moving moods defined by ring there is a list defining them defining me by design ring around my finger tell my many moody passions well never black, for stress is relieved by laughter, but could it be its flaw designed? For taut are shoulders and breath is held, but tense is black defined is that gray I see within, a bit of anxious nerve? Is that why I jump a bit, when you round my verve? no amber seen, no pregnant pause of tense ~ either all or none, I believe, and no green of average, so am relieved, but look! You call, and blending towards the calm of me, strike upon the passion tree! Shake me clean of all awake and blue me zeal for passion’s sake strive me, drive me to-ward the blue drive me darker still, until all we feel is passion’s hue. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
love mood rings and pendents that hang there close to the center this is deep color cool...enjoyed it |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Soliel Noir darling girl this is wonderful. This is a very special piece from you darling heart, incredible writing full of such visual images. It’s wonderful to see you work absolutely wonderful. I love it utterly utterly love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Nice write, enjoyed the read. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
All I have to say is "Passion Tree" should be the title of yr first collection of poems when yr published. (don't know it till you've tried it ) -m. She said burn ... together. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Wonderful comments all... thank you! Especially for the proposed title of a book to think upon, BSQ... |
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