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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-05-21 09:29 AM


all these pretty sights
fake like most humans
shine like coloured glass
in shabby pretence

sometimes all the light
and all the colours
and all the designs
of this crazy world
is not good enough
to cover up lies
or be any help
in those weak moment

plain. i am so dumb
silent like a rock
whose voice lacks echo
with unnoticed thoughts

sometimes all the jazz,
all the rock and roll,
all the r & b
of this wide wild world
does not seem enough
to beat wilderness
or be alone’s friend
for a false moment

perhaps, I should sleep
for a thousand years
so I could be found
(like) a discovery

{{{mad. I am a fool
(less said the better)
why else should I be
somebody’ rare find
like a frog that sings
with a tenor’s voice
only to be trapped --
a trophy on show
with imprisoned thoughts}}}

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (05-21-2002 09:30 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-05-21 09:31 AM



It is so good
to see you here
again...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-05-21 09:33 AM


This is wonderful Sudhir!
Nice to have you back here!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-05-21 11:44 AM


Sudhir,
Glad to see you writing again. Enjoyed

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2002-05-21 11:54 AM


This is so enjoyable to read and it's wonderful to see your name here again....write on! my friend!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2002-05-21 12:41 PM


Feeling like a frog prince without a lily pad? I enjoy the way you blend color and music into emotional keystones. It's good to see you here today.
Sven
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6 posted 2002-05-21 04:02 PM


the voice that was there all along my friend??

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
7 posted 2002-06-19 05:55 AM


Thank you all so very much, my dear friends...

I miss u all so much...

Regards,
Sudhir

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