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pantomime (repost) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I can not pretend today. I can't imagine you're still here. But somehow I can't comprehend a world without you near. I look the same-- my voice unchanged-- my days go on in the same way... But only half of me remains in pantomime of yesterday. Solaced words are meaningless, although intent is kind. I pray to dream a dream of you-- to see you one more time. And yet I lie awake at night afraid that I might sleep. I fear I will dream dreams of you, and wake again to weep. I won't say goodbye again. I can't leave you twice. I sleep-walk through a day's pretend, and bury you each night. * * * *this was was written in grief, so I repost for Larry of course...I hope it's not too morbid. I do everything dark...even symapthize* [This message has been edited by serenity (05-21-2002 06:20 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Celeste, a loss is so hard to bear isn't it?? I don't think I'd worry too much about this being on the dark side. I find it heart revealing as I read it along with your explanation. I enjoyed the thought very much and know where it comes from. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity darling girl this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it, The flow and the structure of this is excellent,. You really are a fine writer. I can really feel this deep in my soul, talking to me in that place where heart’s sorrow reside. This is exquisite writing darling absolutely exquisite, I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dark is beautiful, Sen. Like yr words here. She said burn ... together. |
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