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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-21 03:56 AM



Ties

my heart
you wrap
in silken threads
a power
only once
the moon shed
your soul holds
the end of
this soft string
the other has
my heart
in cling
as time passes on
the closer
we wind
the tie that forever
shall keep us
in bind


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2002-05-21 04:05 AM


Once again, very nice well delivered thought out content....a pleasure to read!
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2 posted 2002-05-21 04:15 PM


cutting loose the ties that bind. . .

well done. . .

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Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-05-22 10:44 AM


yet another beautiful write......
msflame
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4 posted 2002-05-22 11:44 AM


This gave a fresh look at an old expression "the tie that binds" enjoyed.
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