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MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-05-20 02:10 AM

I sighed, "What do you know of love"

The abstract is
only a phase deep and profound
caught in a maze, vague and
unsound

Just beyond
pretending to see, unable to know
what loving will be when love
cannot show

The tangible evidence
that our story goes on underneath
the throes born of love gone
amiss -
with each tasteof a kiss bursting
on orb of bliss - a little like this;

Its really faith
wishing I could fly to aplace
nearby
away from the lie about you and I

Held before
my heart feeling hallowed,
sickenedand swallowed
making all that followed
weakened and shallowed

The hard facts acceptance
that our knowing the truth of
lying ensconced
in young love - promises made, yet
never clear;
finding ones youthful cheer lost
when held
much to dear, and that has
taught me to fear

That love just is...

"Nothing...I know nothing of love," he whispered

The strands in your eyes
That color them wonderful
Stop me & steal my breath...

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

1 posted 2002-05-20 02:24 AM

Some dreams refuse ever to leave
the reaching of the self to bring
only close the object touching or not
corporeal reality is a heartbeat and much
illusion in the larger realm of SoulsHeart
some wounds bleed forever sunrises can last
beyond forever in the heart of the soul
all questions answer themselves in our
ever expanding roles which lead back
back to forevers gentle hold
we are no less
yet always seek the more

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-05-20 08:45 AM

This is stunning...

I love the format and the intellect apparent--the ending was emphatic. Wonderful stuff here.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2002-05-21 11:19 PM

This is outstanding! What a write! BTW, I love your screen name for Passions, it's cool!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-05-21 11:24 PM

Stunning is the right word...beautiful write.
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-21 11:32 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is sad but reflects on a truth so meaningful that I am sure this person will never feel alone for! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I too just love your screen-name, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-21-2002 11:33 PM).]

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