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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-04-22 10:33 PM

Lead me here, to sear the flesh of smoke majestic
Tangled talons of the heart and soul eclectic
Lead me here, to feel the burn of white, unbridled
Tinged in melted fever bound in gold beguiled

Longingly to fan the embers in the last of languish
Tanned and tethered to the white of ending anguish
Listened well the lullaby of breaths consoling
Lead me here, the face to face of thunder rolling

Let me in and find the noble and the earth shake
Steam escapes the closed of path within the earthquake
Let me know a deeper dream than that recounted
Leave me here, to ride the white of passion mounted

Copyright Kkh 4/22/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-23-2002 10:57 PM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-04-22 11:49 PM

TD--the meter of this is exquisite--could you perhaps fill me in? I THINK I counted an 11-syllable construct. And the flow of this is superb, and images vivid and sharp.

Total admiration from me to you.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-04-23 12:16 PM

ttotally powerful

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-04-23 12:19 PM

Kathleen,
Smokin'!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2002-04-23 10:44 PM

This was fantastic and certainly needs more reading than these few, congratulations on a superb poem.

~* Sharon *~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-23 11:07 PM

(smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (sigh) I envisioned you mounting a unicorn for some reason reading this, galloping away to your dreams! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2002-04-24 01:25 AM

Let me know a deeper dream than that recounted
Leave me here, to ride the white of passion mounted

Awesome writing ...
*~coco~*

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-04-24 01:57 PM

You bring nobility to the ache of falling apart. Ooo, thanks for the poem idea!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-04-24 02:00 PM

..Fantastic!!...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2002-04-24 08:47 PM

There is an electricity on the blue pages that seems to revitalize the tones of what we felt and feel.
Thank you for all your inspiration. ThisDiamond

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