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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-19 11:47 AM



Feelings shared in many ways,
the touch of fingers
gliding 'cross the skin,
intertwining with another's, in hand.
Lips pressed at the back of neck,
leaving a warmness to be absorbed.

Words are not necessary,
when eyes speak the truth,
and heat rises to the occasion,
with the body imprisoned by yours.

Feelings are all I have of you,
your sensations remaining a part of me.
Fondness always there,
intertwined with knowing,
that's all that is needed
for now...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-19 05:01 PM


I like the idea of feelings being imprisoned. Now how come there's not an icon of a smiley face behind bars?

Oh, right.... I guess it could be misconstrued.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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2 posted 2002-05-19 05:05 PM


This poem speaks loudly of a sense of oneness
and completeness....

You write romantic thoughts very well M....


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3 posted 2002-05-24 01:34 PM


AhWynter~

'Lips pressed at the back of neck,
leaving a warmness to be absorbed.'


Completeness of thought ... lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-05-24 01:38 PM


Hey, Maureen! Look what I found:



She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 2002-05-24 03:00 PM


for now yes. . .but, for how long??

excellent. . .

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-05-24 03:06 PM


bsquirrel...this is to answer your two responses...you are such a brat.. but I think we see eye to eye

Magnus..yes to both and thank you Barry

Marge ...I am trying to  write of romance, I hope it is
hugsssss



Sven.. for now yes, and forever...more

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7 posted 2002-05-24 03:17 PM


Very lovely Maureen...
Romantic and slightly sensual...
Enjoyed much.
~Hugs~

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8 posted 2002-05-24 04:01 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love always make you feel complete and may loves fondness always be proven to you through every luminous smile! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Christopher
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9 posted 2002-05-24 04:02 PM


"Words are not necessary,
when eyes speak the truth"

eyes always speak the truth - we just have to know how to read them.

Hugs

C

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-05-24 04:56 PM


Lovely...James
Suetang
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11 posted 2002-05-24 06:51 PM


Hello Maureen

Such beautiful, heartfelt words from a very kind soul.

I hope you are well.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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12 posted 2002-05-24 06:54 PM


enjoyed
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13 posted 2002-05-24 10:12 PM


Maureen darling girl this is so perfect, the flow is divine of course but you have again inter-woven a kind of special magic. It haunts the soul with a hint of passion, the memories stirred by a dreaming wish of something indefinable.

Absolutely beautiful writing darling girl you know I really love this


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-05-24 11:42 PM


Words are not necessary,
when eyes speak the truth,
and heat rises to the occasion,
with the body imprisoned by yours.

I know this feeling, Maureen and I love it too!
Great romantic write here.

~delicious feeling hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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