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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Feelings shared in many ways, the touch of fingers gliding 'cross the skin, intertwining with another's, in hand. Lips pressed at the back of neck, leaving a warmness to be absorbed. Words are not necessary, when eyes speak the truth, and heat rises to the occasion, with the body imprisoned by yours. Feelings are all I have of you, your sensations remaining a part of me. Fondness always there, intertwined with knowing, that's all that is needed for now... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the idea of feelings being imprisoned. Now how come there's not an icon of a smiley face behind bars? Oh, right.... I guess it could be misconstrued.  She said burn ... together. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This poem speaks loudly of a sense of oneness and completeness.... You write romantic thoughts very well M.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AhWynter~ 'Lips pressed at the back of neck, leaving a warmness to be absorbed.' Completeness of thought ... lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, Maureen! Look what I found:   She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
for now yes. . .but, for how long?? excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
bsquirrel...this is to answer your two responses...you are such a brat.. but I think we see eye to eye  Magnus..yes to both and thank you Barry Marge ...I am trying to write of romance, I hope it is hugsssss Sven.. for now yes, and forever...more  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Maureen... Romantic and slightly sensual... Enjoyed much. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love always make you feel complete and may loves fondness always be proven to you through every luminous smile! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
"Words are not necessary, when eyes speak the truth" eyes always speak the truth - we just have to know how to read them. Hugs C |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen Such beautiful, heartfelt words from a very kind soul. I hope you are well. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is so perfect, the flow is divine of course but you have again inter-woven a kind of special magic. It haunts the soul with a hint of passion, the memories stirred by a dreaming wish of something indefinable. Absolutely beautiful writing darling girl you know I really love this   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Words are not necessary, when eyes speak the truth, and heat rises to the occasion, with the body imprisoned by yours. I know this feeling, Maureen and I love it too! Great romantic write here.  ~delicious feeling hugsLyra |
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