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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-05-19 06:05 AM



I bathe
your feet
in salt of weep
I gather dampness
in my hair
kissing toes
of gift to me
inhaling sighs
of everywhere

I tongue
the place
between your brow
I drift my nails
in tantalize
I watch
effect
this has on you
I like to watch
you...realize.

I love kisses
nipping me
taste me
one lip at a time...
hisses
from the cat in me
in arch of back
and curl of spine.

A tower
of a touch
withheld...
the promise "of"
becoming
hell...
the wish
to gauge
the depth
of well
hauntings
of my soul
in sell...
feathered thoughts
of oh-so-fine.
fingers speak
in intertwine
language
silently compelled,

secret dream
of silent yell.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-05-19 08:10 AM



Well, I heard this...and smiling in know...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-05-19 08:17 AM


Serenity,
Not so silent. It rode upon the wind and blew my mind.

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-05-19 08:56 AM


I bathe
your feet
in salt of weep
I gather dampness
in my hair
kissing toes
of gift to me
inhaling sighs
of everywhere
==========================

you had me from the very first verse ...
still holding my breath.....

How long can a girl be haunted by you ...
Soon I'll grow up and I wont even flinch at your name.

Alanis Morissette

Cirrus
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since 2002-05-12
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4 posted 2002-05-19 09:14 AM


OMG! I'm with Seymour!

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
5 posted 2002-05-19 09:34 AM


Absolutely first rate, it left me breathless also
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Magnus
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6 posted 2002-05-19 10:29 AM


Whewwwwww!!!

Were you standing over the cauldron as you
chanted this to the ....

Love the flow, cadence.....and this is
just below a raging boil!!!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-05-19 08:38 PM


A tower
of a touch
withheld...
the promise "of"
becoming
hell...
the wish
to gauge
the depth
of well
hauntings
of my soul
in sell...

I haven't read anything that I liked this much in a very long time.  Cool, K.

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2002-05-19 09:34 PM


Don't make me blow sand in your face, Sen.

Loved this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Martie
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9 posted 2002-05-19 09:39 PM


Karen

If your silent is this loud, your loud yell must be .......wheew!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

10 posted 2002-05-20 07:58 AM




heh heh?

ahem...

er, thanks!



and Martie? yep!

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