Open Poetry #20 |
silent yell |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I bathe your feet in salt of weep I gather dampness in my hair kissing toes of gift to me inhaling sighs of everywhere I tongue the place between your brow I drift my nails in tantalize I watch effect this has on you I like to watch you...realize. I love kisses nipping me taste me one lip at a time... hisses from the cat in me in arch of back and curl of spine. A tower of a touch withheld... the promise "of" becoming hell... the wish to gauge the depth of well hauntings of my soul in sell... feathered thoughts of oh-so-fine. fingers speak in intertwine language silently compelled, secret dream of silent yell. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, I heard this...and smiling in know... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Not so silent. It rode upon the wind and blew my mind. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I bathe your feet in salt of weep I gather dampness in my hair kissing toes of gift to me inhaling sighs of everywhere ========================== you had me from the very first verse ... still holding my breath..... How long can a girl be haunted by you ... |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
OMG! I'm with Seymour! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Absolutely first rate, it left me breathless also Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whewwwwww!!! Were you standing over the cauldron as you chanted this to the .... Love the flow, cadence.....and this is just below a raging boil!!! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A tower of a touch withheld... the promise "of" becoming hell... the wish to gauge the depth of well hauntings of my soul in sell... I haven't read anything that I liked this much in a very long time. Cool, K. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Don't make me blow sand in your face, Sen. Loved this. She said burn ... together. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen If your silent is this loud, your loud yell must be .......wheew! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
heh heh? ahem... er, thanks! and Martie? yep! |
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