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tornapart
New Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-05-19 03:48 AM

Wheww its been so long since i have posted

Kinda rusty tho
I wonder, if I lie inside you spread my hands and feet
Taking over your very being, ever so slowly
So that it’s me and not you any more, covering every inch
My soul and your body
Would I be able to see the world like u see it?
When I have been longing for it.
And if I touch the things around u, your hands, my wishes
Will I be able to feel like u do? Touch the way u do
Through your eyes will the colors of the world become brighter?
Will darkness die down if I share your light with u?
Will I be able to hear the things u do?
That soft melodious music that u talk about and I fail to hear
When all i hear is deafening silence and threats of death
And I wonder if lie inside you, will u notice me (for once)
Will I know what’s inside your mind?
Would I be able to talk the way u do
To weave around this magic u so often do
Will I be able to control u? To make you know me
Making u bend at my every whim, every need
If I lie inside and so close to your heart
Will the sweet blood flow inside my veins too
Will I become as wonderful and as cruel?
Will your beauty reflect in me?
Will u be able to understand my truths?
If I lie inside u
Will u finally say those things not said?
The words that I so want to hear
Will I be able to make u speak?
Your thoughts and mine together, learning each other
Will heaven be found and will hell ever burn away in its own fire
So close to you as close as I can get
Will u teach me your games?
The secrets that u have
Will I be able to know and understand?
And still fight for u, making you fight for me
I wonder….
If I lie inside u.
But the question is… will you EVER take me in?

IKNAP
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 47
Torrington, Connecticut

1 posted 2002-05-19 03:53 AM

i should not have the privilage of being the first post for this piece

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

2 posted 2002-05-19 03:56 AM

You just blew me away, what a great write!

Bottom line is, even if you seem 'em coming, you're not ready for the big moments. No one asks for their life to change, not really. But it does. So w

tornapart
New Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 6

3 posted 2002-05-19 10:47 AM

Heya yeh well i read yer stuff and to tell u the truth i stand nowhere!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-05-19 02:02 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I can feel such a strong yearning in these words, sweet friend, I do hope that your invitation is accepted and that together you will always find true solace and escape into each others thoughts with bliss! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

tornapart
New Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 6

5 posted 2002-05-19 02:57 PM

Thanks a lot!

That meant a lot!Hug*

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