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Wrong Number....Evermore... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Once upon an evening chilling, as I sat there slowly warming with a spirit that was willing, all my toes and nothing more Come to me a phone a ringing, of an angel in her singing singing words so enchanting, exciting at my bedroom door Tis a beauty comes a calling, in softness her words feeling taking heart a flutt’ring, falling.. flutt’ring, falling, nothing more But, alas I did so telling, of those words so sweet, compelling miss the ring of my phone belling, telling of the call before Twas the call from within memory, of a time from in a century when a string and can were saying, Watson, come, unlock the door For the call was taken to history, now a part of telephonic mystery and the phone rings incessantly, asking for the lost Lenore [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-18-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ This is Fantastic....It flowed so beautifully....hugsss Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
WONDERFUL WRITING! As soon as I get rid of my writer's block we must duet together again. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lauren, I do always enjoy your replies, thanx. Joanna, I will be here....whenever you feel you are ready, we will Do it a duet... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Magnus ... this is exceptional! Truly a wonderful write in flow and format. Your talent is showing brilliantly in this piece ... very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, so Poe is sitting here with me, nodding his head, saying "Yes, by Jove, I think he's got it!" [Sorry, Mr. Shaw, for the borrowing of Pygmalion...] where was I...oh yes. Poe is nodding his head, knowing that if phones had been around, well...just to say, HE is saying, IWIHWT.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh how very AWESOME. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry....THIS you have written so very well. Quite a different storyline. Enjoyed much! ~HUGS~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (05-18-2002 08:23 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Magnus hi there again this is what I call writing, the rhythm the rhyme the internal flow are as smooth as water over glass. Absolutely exquisite writing, I wish I could write like this, however I know I never will so I won’t wish for what I know won’t occur. Very well done, I really do love your work   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Enjoyed this, Barry! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Oh Barry, I just love the kind of selective borrowing you put into this, sweet friend, how you gave a classic a modern twist just like the movie O' Brother, Where Art Thou was a modernized version of Homer's The Odyssey! (big hugggssssss) You are growing so rapidly as a fine poet, sweet friedn, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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