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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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The city skies with lines across work upheavals, signs of the cross answer to my question in the skies question begins in the mind...so do lies moods apt, questions flow with winds wagged tails, feathers flared known to flights, when pilots dared answers cross oceans...does someone care? answer to each question in the mind the answer is the self in its find; minds take flight across named nations answer to guardians at way stations. written poems in the air why wait for paper sheet dispair write of the city which is me tell the world that life is free. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-18-2002 09:00 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Exceptional write, enjoyed |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Martin~ good to read you this morning....I enjoyed this....as always....  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sy, this one is inspired by a play called the Education of a Poet...the message here is that we have all the answers in our minds |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Lauren for sharing your thoughts, good weekend |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
written poems in the air why wait for paper sheet dispair write of the city which is me tell the world that life is free. I really enjoyed this, Martin, and I'm glad you told us what the message was, because otherwise, I would have been up all night trying to figure it out...I felt like I was so close to knowing and yet it kept evading me. I posted a poem that was not exactly easy to figure out either, a couple of days ago...it was called "Almost Remembered" and I noticed that I didn't get many replies on it. I think people are embarassed to say that they don't understand something...but it happens often in poetry because the writer understands perfectly what he/she means...but its not always obvious to the reader without clues. Thanks for sharing this with us.  ~obscure thinking poet hugsLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this does take an extra reading, Lyra..thanks for sharing your ideas |
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