Some Kind of Feeling (STILL rambling)

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Open Poetry #20

Some Kind of Feeling (STILL rambling)

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 2002-05-17 04:23 PM

have to admit, i'll be kinda glad when this rambling gets rambled.

Some Kind of Feeling
© 2002 C.G. Ward

went on a tangent the other day
and ripped a few bars off a song
that pretended to know
what my life was all about.
it was wrong,
but the words were pretty
and they dangled meaning
long enough for me to realize
that it doesn’t really matter,
because the chorus will always
wrap a melody around your memories
and spark some kind of feeling.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-05-17 04:40 PM

Sometimes the words capture the feeling, sometimes the feeling the words. Either way, I'm enjoying your recent ponderous ramblings. You may be in a rush to move on from them, I'm still enjoying the ride.

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
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2 posted 2002-05-17 05:13 PM

Music will always do that to 'ya - hell, I have 4 CD's to prove it.

Hugs you

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-05-17 05:14 PM

went on a tangent the other day
and ripped a few bars off a song
that pretended to know
what my life was all about.
it was wrong,

"strumming my pain with his fingers, singing my life with his verse"--
so I came to see him, listen for awhile
killing me softy with his song'' something like that....

that stanza brought that song to mind, actually the whole song ran through my mind...when I read this....

but the words were pretty
and they dangled meaning
long enough for me to realize
that it doesn’t really matter,
because the chorus will always
wrap a melody around your memories
and spark some kind of feeling

Music always tends to remind us...what ever it is we feel....

Peace

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-17-2002 06:15 PM).]

Cirrus
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since 2002-05-12

Posts 55

4 posted 2002-05-17 05:14 PM

because the chorus will always
wrap a melody around your memories
and spark some kind of feeling

A nice little ramble here Christopher.... I especially love the lines above

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