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A Shadow Passes
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A Shadow Passes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A shadow passes in the breeze of night upon a mem'ry seize Whispering soft in moment new of love and life, of we and you A shadow comes within light against the set of stars in night Softly walking across the walls bathing in streams of crystal falls The image of a woman’s form tenderly soft touching most warm Like the dew of flowers in bloom This shadow floats throughout the room Pass on through as my mind does sleep leave the vision of darkness deep Share a kiss upon lips anew as shadows walk not one but two [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-16-2002 04:52 PM).] |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Tender beauty to take into the night... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
ah, romance... beautiful poem! ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Pass on through as my mind does sleep leave the vision of darkness deep Share a kiss upon lips anew as shadows walk not one but two ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah Barry Barry...Barry.... You have rendered me speechless.... May I just smile and say I love this? ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm not quite certain of what to say, but only to smile. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Elan, thank you very much.... Tier, Just a little ditty to start the day. Nancy, always love your cheery reviews.. Hugs... PS...no meaning to this poem....Just words romantic, an expression of thanx....for all of the little "Bumps"....thank you! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You do this so well! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You're a natural born ronmantic! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it. |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Nice work! The lines are fluid and present the images well. The third stanza is particularly graceful, because the unusual placing of the words fits and flows so well. Very lovely! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Shadows passing in the night...ah yes Magnus, have felt this so many times. Wonderful romantic write. Thanks! Like a red brick, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Enchanting and beautiful poem of love in the night of dreams. Very beautifully penned. ***Ivy Rose |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
So sweet and romantic!  Jan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Magnus...James |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
What a smooth and beautiful rhythm, a lovely write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words barry as always..hugs ~Victoria |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a new name for you. You shall herewith be dubbed The Renaissance Man... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Beautiful thoughts from your pen~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was beautiful, Magnus. And darkly warm. She said burn ... together. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Magnus: A very nice warm open romantic flow to this! |
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