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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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a glance shared a moment stolen instants that link lives in time why must they be so fleeting when eternity is so long? ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
why indeed... well done, my friend... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
but for that moment to but share to leave a link of caring there... Élan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Sven, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I too find that kind of sad how such precious moments drift by so fast, yet it is such a beautiful feeling to have them come and go always in true love too! (big hugggsssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Indeed. Your writing has no boundaries, Sven. Cor |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow....did you ever hit the poetic nail right on the head with this thought..... Perfectly said Sven....YEP it is.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I have wondered this myself. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow Sven! Love the words and the format! Great write my friend. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You left me much food for thought here, excellent expression and format. You are perhaps the most versatile and creative writer I know. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
a deep thought in a tiny poem. great stuff, Sven. -Dave |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You brought out eternity and temporality in a poem of small words and simple lines -- I love how you do that! Great stuff, Sven. She said burn ... together. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ Very thought provoking...well done sir poet... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Life can change in an instant~ so I'm savig the link~ Loved the simplicity in this poem of yours~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . isn't it amazing how the most simple of thoughts can be the most far-reaching?? you're the reason why. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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