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Martie

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California

0 posted 2002-05-16 03:15 PM

She was as graceful
               as the sway of pond moss
Quiet
      as dusk
               falling across the canyon

Her breath
       moved the yellow wall of mustard

She was covered with shivered listening

Not only the grass sighed when she was gone

[This message has been edited by Martie (05-16-2002 03:16 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2002-05-16 03:17 PM

love this imagery here! Wonderful!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2002-05-16 03:18 PM

Now wouldn't any creature
want to be as graceful as
this well written heartsong

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2002-05-16 03:26 PM

Ahhh, Martie, very gentle smile... this one was breathtaking..You weaved a story with so few words...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2002-05-16 03:52 PM

Beautiful picture your words have painted, Martie. *S* I like this very much.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-16 04:03 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your imagery always makes me smile, this is a gorgeous depiction of a surreal waterfall! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-05-16 09:52 PM

another gorgeous write, from your magic pen.
I loved this one, Martie.

~magic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-16 10:13 PM

Martie, you know I love it....
Loved it before I read it...
Because, it said you wrote it.

Wonderful imagery here dear poetess.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (05-16-2002 10:16 PM).]

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-05-16 10:43 PM

My mother will be honored at this stirring tribute

bsquirrel

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9 posted 2002-05-17 12:58 PM

Thank god yr here Martie -- yr words make time worth it. If that made sense.... (it did t' me)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-05-17 01:10 AM

Your gentle words stir the reader and force them to pause! You're a true poet Martie!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-05-17 10:17 AM

MartieSis~

Delicate, delicate, delciate~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA

12 posted 2002-05-17 04:00 PM

Absolutely breathtaking in its imagery. Beautiful write!

Cirrus
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since 2002-05-12

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13 posted 2002-05-17 05:31 PM

Beautiful Martie!

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

14 posted 2002-05-17 05:39 PM

Well done, Martie...

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