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| Open Poetry #20 |
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Cinnamon fields |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She smells of cinnamon fields. I dance by her fire. I dance to her sun. The cool root-wet of morning. I find reflected fire upon her meadow pond. I dance by her scent. I dance to her morning. I dance in her song. I place smalling candle into her poplar branches. How she looks in bloom of dawn. She smells of cinnamon fields. Smoke curl my graining moon tonight. I am her one. She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-15-2002 01:58 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great imagery: "I place smalling candle"...I LIKE that line...may have to borrow it.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael....love this....great lines and phrases here. Wonderful imagery. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Why, thank y' both.  She said burn ... together. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello bsquirrel I enjoyed this so very much. I loved the images and fragrance portrayed through your words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Sue. I'm glad you enjoyed my words. Mike She said burn ... together. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love this....and the images....you have a very striking way about your words sir...NICE... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
She smells of cinnamon fields. Smoke curl my graining moon tonight. I am her one. Lovely words and gorgeous imagery, Mr.Squirrel.  ~cinnamon hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
stunning imagery, If I said you fill up my senses would it be too much? Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike, this is so great! have really missed reading lately...things here are so crazy. Probably will be for another month or two, easy.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nah, I can live with all yr praise, easy. And SEA, ah've missed y', so glad t' see you pokin' yr head in every now and again. Hope things level out for y' soon.She said burn ... together. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So sensory! Delicious! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm glad y' enjoyed, Martie. She said burn ... together. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mike darling boy what a sensuous and beautiful piece this is, it delights my eyes, and tickles my senses with visions of heat and fire. Never do you fail to show your artistry and superb form in writing. Utterly utterly fabulous writing skills. You have to know I utterly utterly love this one Exquisite darling boy absolutely exquisite.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A tip of the hat to you, Mushy.  Mike She said burn ... together. |
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