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0 posted 2002-05-14 10:27 PM



Within some magic crystal ball our lives will softly touch
Each to brush the other as a kiss on cheek or rampant rush
The positive and negative to still conform in humble tenderness
Within some mystic wisdom lies a reason for both love and bitterness

And still the water deep displaced and filling back the void
Each gentle ripple of the stream of life if satiated or annoyed
The freight train impact gathered up in loving arms to pacify
Within some mystic reason the spirit of true love can satisfy

In every time related in this motion and this dance of give and take
Each to the other helping hand in joint regard to propagate
The sweeping in of gentle wind a clearing of the old now passed
Within some mystic rain the washing of the pain, a bond to ever-last

Copyright Kkh 5/14/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-14 10:45 PM


Kathleen this is so lovely...
Very lyrical with wonderful flow.
Enjoyed much this evening.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-05-14 11:05 PM


Nancy said it all, the flow and the message within your poem were "awesome", and I kept this one in my library.  Excellent!

Let's spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end, and more on when it's going to start!

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3 posted 2002-05-14 11:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too wish for this ever-expanding harmony and selflessness and for the whole world to hold hands and find this stillness everlast! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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