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In the Beginning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In the Beginning a Sunday morn came gently lighting up your eyes |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really beautiful  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! This is such a beautiful way to start this brand new day, sweet friend, with the new Open Poetry #20 forum open and Daylight Savings offering us more daylight, and most of all, the celebration of this First Sunday, this is the perfect poem to raise this day! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-07-2002 12:33 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, yes, it surely did! The beginning of the new covenant that 1st wonderful Sunday! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very soothing Karilea ... a perfectly sunshiney piece, from a perfectly sunshiney lady. Best wishes, /Kit |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked the sleepy eyed mood in this. Time to wake up and smell the coffee! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, this one just took my breath away! You know how I love these! ~Sunday smiles and hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very very soft and very loving....Nicely done KJ... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ This is magic and peaceful... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul this is utterly darling I love it, you always seem to be able to write the moment. Excellent writing darling heart excellent. You have written the perfect morning here. YOU are an absolutely fabulous artist. I love it. I love this utterly utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - and a Sunday evening came by, slowly closing your eyes of beauty... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
WONDERFUL. floria Floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
then came Sunday night showing softness in your eyes beginning again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Each day, a new beginning. Hugs to sunshine and you too, Karilea. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
sometimes brevity is simply beautiful... this is one of them. Well written, Karilea. Here is an April Wish for you: May the sky above you Remain a brilliant saphire blue, And may the birds of April, Be heard singing just for you. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
Wow! sometimes it takes so little to express so much. I read this three times and I still say WOW! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Only you could shine such beauty in so few words... Lovely writing PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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