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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-05-14 11:28 AM


Need to preface this with apologies to all for not being around. Unfortunately I am leaving town today for the rest of the week and won't be able to read or comment on the wonderful things I have read..miss you all... hope to be back next week and have a little more time! Take care all....
Buried layers
in silt shifted
ripples of time
settled slowly
as currents drifted

Stones covered
softly in beds
gouged with torrents
of flooding spring
now seem dead

but elements
weather even hard
geodic souls
Until exposed again,
If in only shards

© Copyright 2002 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-05-14 11:33 AM


Ron

Time changes everything...especially the soft flesh of we humans.  Good to see you, my friend...take care on your out of town.

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2 posted 2002-05-14 11:33 AM



Oh yes, you're very back....

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3 posted 2002-05-14 05:16 PM



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4 posted 2002-05-14 05:17 PM


Yr eroded words yield gems.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 2002-05-14 05:39 PM


Capt Hair,
This is a good one and have a good one. Sy

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6 posted 2002-05-14 08:05 PM




(smiles) I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful words always light these pages and I hope you have a good time and we'll all be here when you come back! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-14-2002 08:05 PM).]

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