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Temptation Seeks (my own challenge)
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Temptation Seeks (my own challenge) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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We stand here-- deeper quiets hold the breathing of night emotions, heated passion, spinning lovers, duel affection temptation seeks caress my cheek again, softly--remember Love only you I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-15-2002 09:55 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, caress my cheek again, softly--remember Love only you If only... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is poignant in its wanting Lauren... much enjoyed the soft tones... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
emotions, heated passion, spinning lovers, duel affection Goodness Lauren, your poetry speaks to me in the softest voice~ Loved the sound of this! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-14-2002 02:23 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
poignant my friend, but from you soft heart, so extremely beautiful...hugs at ya girlie.... Like a red brick, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you cheek aways be caressed by the hands of love and offer you faith and trust forever and true happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"caress my cheek again, softly--remember" to not forget, yes. enjoyed! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl this is as soft as a child’s sigh, I love this poem. This is awesome and so beautifully written I’m stunned you make it look easy when I know it’s not. You are truly an awesome writer do I love this? YOU know I do it’s superb. Utterly utterly wonderful The beauty of the scene is reflected in your poetic eye how could anyone fail to enjoy the beauty of this wonder. Wonderful writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Lovely, soft and gentle. Enjoyed |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Quiet breathing ...cheek carressing ... very duel-able ... only you ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice watercolor, with some oil mixed in... She said burn ... together. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, what can I say? This is exquisite! Enjoying the way you write....for sure! ~Hugs~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wish that the vibrations of my being could be quiet enough to hear the same voice that you do. . . you always amaze me. . . and always will -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is really beautiful writing. -Dave |
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