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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-05-13 03:18 AM



Red Rose Of Passion


Gazing sparkling eyes
He leant on the door
In my giveaway glow
I’m anticipating more

This reunion surprise
With rose and a grin
Mutual  feelings felt
Having invited him in

Desires now intensify
He spoke so tenderly
Butterflies now dance
Swirling inside of me

Having time together
The candles in place
Igniting those embers
The longest embrace

Language lovers use
He clasped my hand
Red rose of passion
We each understand

Hope© 2002

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D.Lester Young
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1 posted 2002-05-13 04:40 AM


A embrace of words in such grace, that the embers heated. Nicely done.
Alan
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right next door
2 posted 2002-05-13 09:49 PM


Such a sweet embrace need to be read more. This is a wonderful work.
alan

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3 posted 2002-05-14 08:28 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, may the butterfly of your heart always kiss your hearts rose and make all your dreams come true! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-14 05:11 PM



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-14 05:46 PM


HopeS,
Hope reigns eternal, enjoyed.

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