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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Morning sees me not much any more Through into sunlight I'll not open the door My last morning was bright and pleasing to the eye Wakening with a lover all brown with natures dye Walking to home that eve distracted by a scent One sweet and comanding but not heaven sent Eyes clear as and locks as if of spun rain If they hadn't been empty I'd have see the pain Longing has come and and mourning does too my loss is completed when thinking of you Now I aviod the sunlight the least little speck And let no-one see the twin scars on my neck |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gotta love that last verse...I know the bite of a blood sucker myself!  I like this alot...it could be really gothic, too, if you dressed it up in drag a bit!  and... I can't say I see you here often, but perhaps you just don't reflect in mirrors?  enjoyed, much!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Enjoyed. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
DonFurr, you write "sad" real good. Very good, ME |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yikes!! Good one!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Way cool write Don. Loved the ending. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Don I really enjoyed this and will look forward to more from you. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if you wanna get me going, write sad ones... OK...I'm going!  |
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