Open Poetry #20 |
Missing You |
Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
The kiss that rocked the world moved the oceans Standing there eyes locked Hearts pounding Deep sensation There in my head everything screamed out your name I saw past those eyes Straight into your heart and soul Briefly, I saw a piece of me that I thought was lost in you There, in that moment, I was one with you Everything I ever wanted to be was there Yet, I will not hold you back I cannot be you "Goodnight Elizabeth"* Should I walk away knowing that someone else might be holding you later Lips touch Tongues intertwine Breathe I felt it through to my toes Mad electric tingles surge straight through me I know as I push you away That I will always feel the same Long I waited for this moment Reality crashes upon me like a brick from the sky As much as I hate it; I have to let you go Walking to the car Exchange of hugs and kisses on the cheek Hands locked As mine slides from yours I feel as if I have lost you forever Will you miss me Will you think of me Will you dream of me As I will miss you Dream of you Think of you I hold that moment in my heart as I anticipate your return For you know as I do that I you will always love me and I will always love you Love, Ladycat *Goodnight Elizabeth is a Counting Crows song that I would love for everyone to listen to one day. So much thought behind it. Thank you all I love you. Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Reality crashes upon me like a brick from the sky As much as I hate it; I have to let you go Lotta great lines in this. Conveyed the feelings very well. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well penned, very visual and flowed wonderfully. Loved it ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
I wish I could tell you how much I can relate, amazing! Feel like I am living in this poem right now. "Waiting for your return..." I know the feeling! |
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