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Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-05-11 11:43 PM

The kiss that rocked the world moved the oceans
Standing there eyes locked
Hearts pounding
Deep sensation
There in my head everything screamed out your name
I saw past those eyes
Straight into your heart and soul
Briefly, I saw a piece of me that I thought was lost in you
There, in that moment, I was one with you
Everything I ever wanted to be was there
Yet, I will not hold you back
I cannot be you "Goodnight Elizabeth"*
Should I walk away knowing that someone
else might be holding you later
Lips touch
Tongues intertwine
Breathe
I felt it through to my toes
Mad electric tingles surge straight through me
I know as I push you away
That I will always feel the same
Long I waited for this moment
Reality crashes upon me like a brick from the sky
As much as I hate it; I have to let you go
Walking to the car
Exchange of hugs and kisses on the cheek
Hands locked
As mine slides from yours I feel as if I have lost you forever
Will you miss me
Will you think of me
Will you dream of me
As I will miss you
Dream of you
Think of you
I hold that moment in my heart
as I anticipate your return
For you know as I do that I you will always love me
and I will always love you

Love,
Ladycat

*Goodnight Elizabeth is a Counting Crows song that I would love for everyone to listen to one day. So much thought behind it.
Thank you all I love you.

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-05-12 12:06 PM

Reality crashes upon me like a brick from the sky
As much as I hate it; I have to let you go

Lotta great lines in this. Conveyed the feelings very well.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2002-05-12 02:11 AM

Well penned, very visual and flowed wonderfully. Loved it
~HUGS~ Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

3 posted 2002-05-12 03:03 AM

I wish I could tell you how much I can relate, amazing! Feel like I am living in this poem right now. "Waiting for your return..." I know the feeling!

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